First of all, I think your design is really good, depending on the setting/style I feel like it works really well, at least to me, I feel like mostly what could be a bit better are the forms, and like aherve said, pushing the idea that she is a waitress. Also the hands and feet are a bit too big, and the hair design could be just a bit more interesting, other than that, you did a great job.

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Aitor Vela Mora · 2026-08-06T10:42:22.364Z

How can i improve this female OC?

@bamkyre2 months ago

First of all, I think your design is really good, depending on the setting/style I feel like it works really well, at least to me, I feel like mostly what could be a bit better are the forms, and like aherve said, pushing the idea that she is a waitress. Also the hands and feet are a bit too big, and the hair design could be just a bit more interesting, other than that, you did a great job.

@aherve2 months ago

Hello Really cool OC. I love the silhouette and vibe ! It's hard to say what to improve, I find the anatomy good (except maybe the waist is a bit small relatively to the leg/foot). But to really improve it I would need more storytelling (that I can't know myself) : * She as as well made but simple dress => minor noble in the country side ? * She as a dagger : adventurous ? revenge ? in danger ? * Dagger + Smile = Crazy ? secretive ? spy ? I would maybe add more props : - A basket to add the country side ? - Or a stack of paper to add to the spy theme ? - Skulls for more crasy ?

@amirel972 months ago

Thanks! Its a tavern waitress that lures clients with her charms and robs with her dagger.

@aherve2 months ago

Replying to @amirel97

Great, Then maybe a tablecloth or a beverage/bottle in the second hand could help with the storytelling.

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