Looks pretty good!! Amazing work. I think I would draw the tail on the right character a bit thicker so it doesnt look lit its coming out of his hips and maybe adjust the angle of the wrist of the right character because the arm is not in an 90 degrees angle

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Gavin Johnson · 2026-07-09T04:45:16.064Z

I like drawing in a comic/Manga style, at least thats the goal and hope I get skilled enough to do in the near future, making my own comics. I feel there are areas in anatomy, design, clothes, 3d forms, or making thing look interestingor believable, (did complete the beginner course) and many other areas i'm not at least 90% good at yet, I can't tell if my art is messy or what im missing. NOTE: the characters in this piece are young teens, not adults.

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