Hi. The proportions are roughly ok (although the lower part of the body appears to be a bit too flat and small, especially compared to very thick legs; neck also could use a second look; back of the head might be a bit too big). The main problem I see is the gesture. The character seems to be falling down/float - which doesn't correspond to the relaxed gesture of the upper body. Try replicate this pose yourself in front of the mirror. I think it would work better if you made the character put some weight on the walking stick or assumed more stable standing pose. When in doubt, draw a rough construction over your drawing and check it out without all the details. You might see the issues that are buried under the lines.

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Lo Lo · 2026-10-15T09:15:19.272Z

I can't get the proportion right, maybe the torso and right arm are a little bit off?

Hi. The proportions are roughly ok (although the lower part of the body appears to be a bit too flat and small, especially compared to very thick legs; neck also could use a second look; back of the head might be a bit too big). The main problem I see is the gesture. The character seems to be falling down/float - which doesn't correspond to the relaxed gesture of the upper body. Try replicate this pose yourself in front of the mirror. I think it would work better if you made the character put some weight on the walking stick or assumed more stable standing pose. When in doubt, draw a rough construction over your drawing and check it out without all the details. You might see the issues that are buried under the lines.

@lo087893 days ago

Thanks, I've changed the way she's standing, and it looks better

furina sket

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