My Artwork

maybe block the figure as a few big boxes on a simple ground plane first so perspective and proportion read together before cleaning the linework

Hello there! The proportions feel a little off. The neck is too long and narrow, which makes the character feel somewhat unbalanced overall. On the other hand, not showing part of the waist makes the abdominal area look too narrow. I corrected these proportional issues, mainly by giving the neck better proportions. Notice that the head shouldn't be positioned so far away from the shoulders. :) I also suggested drawing the full arm instead of cropping it. I've read and seen that it's generally not recommended to crop limbs this way. :) Hope this helps!