Can someone help me improve this?

I’m struggling with the arm placement and the face, I need this for an important project but I can’t happen to fix what it’s wrong. Please someone help this little fella. Any other corrections is also appreciated! 💗

Smaugust purple

I wasn't sure where to place the hind legs?

Female portrait

My main focus is on line weight hierarchy and shading with clear form indication. I feel like there’s still a lot I could add, but my experience tells me that if I keep going, it’s going to end up feeling overstuffed and overworked. I’d like to know what I should add while avoiding that.

Drawing in progress

I genuinely don't know what to add to her face and hair as well, and I don't really know HOW to add without it looking messed up. Plus I GENUINELY struggle with hair texture (not rendering). If anyone has any tips for me that would be great. She's supposed to be a medieval woman, strong but not violent

Dragon

Ballpoint & Tombows

Dragon

Ballpoint & Tombows

Dragon

Ballpoint & Tombows

Dragon

Ballpoint & Tombows >> really focusing on values and form in these

Dragon

Ballpoint & Tombows