Hiya ! Here's my take, now here comes the explanations behind my modifications : - I added more patterns to support the 30/70 rule (30% details where your focal point is, which is often the top body/face, 70% where your eyes can rest, less details) - I changed the shape language to include more triangles/points, the choice of colours and the scars (+ snake are "scary") let me think she's evil, so everything pointy helps reinforce that identity. You did pretty good on the colours, the distribution is coherent ! | Artwod Feedback