I'd make it clear that their body are being pressed against each other, since the kiss seems very passionate (I colored the shirts for that reason, for clarity) ; don't mind the badly drawn hand of the guy, i just wanted to make it wrap around her waist more, to show that he's really holding her with passion even more, you could also make it like his hair is getting a bit messed up cause she's pressing/holding it in the action ; last tiny change I made it so her back could be even more curved, since she's being pressed against him. | Artwod Feedback