Hiya ! I think what's mostly missing is some volume, more around the top of the body, you did a pretty nice job showing it with the feet not being on the same level for example. The very straight left arm doesn't feel very natural and too stiff, so I changed the pose as shown on my version, but it's only a suggestion. If you want an assignment for your next drawing, I'd recommend on the head, you can look up the Loomis method or artwod's intro to portrait if you have access to it. | Artwod Feedback