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Hello ! I went a bit deep into this, I hope my explanations are clear enough ;-; I hope that helps for the "believability" part, hopefully that was what you were looking for. You can apply these rules everytime you do a robotic type of character, but it applies also to humans (although we can't see your joints, but we do see the results of their movements). Don't hesitate to message me on discord (i'm on the server) if you need more help ! :)
Improve your fundamentals, a 3 min read
Master halftones by establishing shapes, volumes, and shadows first, then practicing on beans, noses, portraits, and posters to add texture and depth to your artwork.
Rendering
Sketchbook pages 01
Hey everyone! this is my first post here - I’m super excited to share some of my art with you all! I really want to improve my compositional/perspective skills during this month’s challenge. But my main goal is just to have fun and make cool drawings :D - I appreciate any feedback you can give me for my first entry for the challenge :D
David
One thing I constantly struggle with is rendering it always feels as if I’m missing a step or theirs a gap between my knowledge. Feel free to critique my lighting, shading, and etc.
Day 2 Jacqueline's Sketchbook
A Knysna Turaco bird in Art Nouveau style
Mermaid
Made improvment of the hands.
WIP Jay Enhypen
I am struggling with capturing his face from my refrence, I made a mistake with choosing my reference a bit, I chose the refrence pose where the face wasn't fully visible and used other refrence for his face so I had to adjust the face angle and how he is looking at the viewer which led to facial structure changes, I can't add my reference in this site because it doesn't support more images. I want you to help me with how do I make look more like Jay.
Page 2 (day 2)
Page 2 (day 2) Trying to be consistent with the challenge. In this drawing, can someone teach me how to make simple backgrounds? ( Other adivces is good too!)
2 sketchbook page
Some arm studys. I wanted to practice the anatomy for the ice arm of the eleven archer character
About linework in general
I finished it by adding this little walrus imp thing. I believe this is currently the absolute limit of my abilities. If there is anything to improve in this i am currently blind to it. I see this as a problem, since if i do not recognize my mistakes i cannot improve further, therefore if anyone can poke holes in this it would be deeply appreciated. Or maybe i should just start learning values already, since linework is kinda the only thing i've ever done.
Ice archer
I got some feedback and tried Applying it, but my request still stands. I think it’s better now, but it could be even better, so any advice on the render or materials like the leather or the ice would help. Thanks!