@pifalo

“It might help if you construct your figure first and then build your anatomy on top. Also, try to have the hair feel more full and cascading. I hope this sketch helps out :)”

“Try to tell a story with your image. You can do that by adding an interesting background that can help tell us why we should be interested. Your drawing is nice and has nice gesture, so just think abo”

“The best perspective for this scene is a one point perspective. I did a quick sketch to show you how to set it up.”

“I like this extreme angle, it creates a lot of dynamics. The issue is that he has no midsection, and his legs don't really make anatomical sense. Also, the extended arm needs to get bigger as it come”

“This drawing is pretty awesome, love the cyborg body. The human portion of the body could use some anatomy and the face is a bit out of proportion. I hope my sketch helps :)”

“Your fireplace and carpet are not following the perspective you set up. Make sure all your lines go to the vanishing point you have established.”

“One thing you have to remember is that once you set up your perspective, all the lines in the scene have to follow that perspective. In your scene the fireplace and the carpet are not in perspective. ”

“To pull of this composition you will need to create a 3 point perspective. If you are looking up at the scene, then everything will converge at the top. Also, if we are looking up at her, her head wo”

“This is a very clean drawing with nice proportions and shape. I get why you want some variety in your line, it all kind of feels the same. Don't be afraid to really pump up your line , especially whe”

“What you have set up here should be a one point perspective. First you should create a horizon line, then pick your vanishing point. All the perspective line should come from there and help you place ”

“By adding some thickness to the helmet will make it look more 3 dimensional. Also, have the hair move up and over the back of the helmet which will also make it feel more dimensional.”

“I like your design, he looks like an ancient Scottish warrior. I think what is making rendering hard is that right now you just have an outline of the character. If you ad some structure and anatomy ”

“I like the attitude in this pose, but it's a little off balance. I moved the right foot out a little and added some gesture to the legs. Also, think about having some perspective on the bottom of the ”

“Try to pick a light source and direction, it will help you figure out what is in shadow. Adding anatomy also helps, you can shadow what ever is facing away from the light. I hope this helps :)”

“Try not to have your lines parallel, it stiffens the pose. This is happening in the legs, but if you use more anatomy it should help.”

“It might help if you use boxes for the torso and pelvis, it will make it easier to put them in perspective. Also, pay attention to the tilt of the ribcage and pelvis.”

“I think the face looks pretty good, but the pose does look a little stiff. you can fix that by adding some gesture to the arms and legs as well as the torso. Also she feels like she is missing her pel”

“This mannequin is pretty good. I would just shorten the neck a little and expand the ribcage and chest on his right side.”

“try to think of the volume of the torso and pelvis as well as the perspective. Your really not that far off.”

“The perspective looks good. To do this kind of shot requires a 3 point perspective, which you have. Look forward to the finish.”

“You're doing pretty well, with a few adjustments to the way you do your proportions and anatomy, you will improve. Notice I changed the shape of the eye to make it feel more round, and raised the nos”

“I like your ideas here, I think it just needs a couple of thing. First off, your forms are really good and 3dimensional, but, the shape on the top of his head looks like a mouth, causing the head look”

“Adding some anatomy to the legs will give them some gesture so they won't look so stiff.”

“I think opening her eyes bigger makes her look more crazy. Also, add some shape to the hair so it doesn't feel so stiff, and make the teeth much smaller.”