@jaffthepure

“Very cute but I noticed the head and neck were attached at a strange spot. I tried to fix it a little but it's just something to keep in mind when sketching.”

“Leather is reflective even in low light. Adding more aggressive highlights might help with the texture.”

“The sword looks lop-sided. Making sure the handle is at the same angle as the blade will keep this from happening. Making sure to respect the angles even when it isn't perfectly straight up and down t”

“The lighting looks pretty good in my opinion, but if you're looking for variety, I would suggest experimenting with funky other color lighting. In a color separate from the main city color. I did it w”

“The thick line art on the building makes it pop out against the thin line art used for you main subject. Using thinner or colored lines might help it not stand out so much.”

“Your OG design looks AWESOME imo. I had some ideas to give it some variety but I'm hardly professional. I felt adding some color to the jewelry might make for a more interesting palette and that so”

“This is just how I've started doing hair. You might also consider using thinner line art for hair details. Hair is thin after all and it may help keep it from looking blocky. Keep working at it :D”