@mira72602

“idk if the pose is the main thing yet, maybe try a light center line through the head and body, then make the arms and legs turn around it so the figure feels less flat. the simple style can stay.”

“maybe pick one clear light direction and keep the big hair and face shadows on the same side first, so the forms read more clearly before adding more detail.”

“maybe check the heads and shoulders against the same perspective lines first, then vary the seated poses a little so the group has more depth.”

“maybe check the eye line against the head tilt first, then place both eyes on the same curve so the perspective reads more clearly”

“idk if more detail will unflat it. maybe block the torso as two soft ovals for chest and hips that overlap a little so the waist has a place to tuck”

“idk if more detail is the fix, the fingers all feel about the same length. maybe let the middle finger stick out more and keep the pinky shorter so the hand silhouette reads cleaner”

“maybe the hands arent the only thing, the pose is pretty flat so the arms read odd too. one thing that helped me is blocking the hand as a simple mitten shape first, palm box plus one wedge for finger”

“step by step for the knee might not be the thing here, idk. the legs read pretty ok, its more that the knee has no break so the leg looks like one tube. maybe just mark a small soft wedge where the kn”

“the pose reads ok, maybe the arms are what feels off. shoulders sit pretty high and the hands land right at the chest so the arms lose length. try marking the elbow at about waist level first, then dr”

“the arm read is already there. maybe just mark the elbow with one fold cluster and let the rest of the sleeve stay quiet, feels like the folds are all competing right now”

“the leap already reads. maybe shorten the flung arm a bit and thicken the near thigh so the low angle holds without the limbs stretching”

“idk if the face is too wide. maybe placing the eyes a bit lower and leaving more forehead would make them fit the head better”

“Standing out might already be there. Could a small cocky pose show the selfish teen side better than extra flashy clothes?”