@poltercat

“Hello! Your art is super cool! I would say that it's easier to make decisions about contrast once everything is somewhat shaded. Once you do that first pass, you can think about what areas need mor”

“Hello! I'm guessing this is Asgore, right? I'm excited for the next chapter too, lol. Firstly, I think it would help a lot for you to clean up your lines before anything else -- it makes it look le”

“Hi! Your art is so cool!! I made both of their hands and the blue character's front leg bigger, because objects that are closer to the camera should be bigger (foreshortening). I think it makes it ”

“Hello! Your drawing of Kit is so cute! I think that the head neck connection is okay! I totally understand what you're saying, sometimes that area gives me trouble too. I thought that she alread”

“Hi! Your character is so cute!! I thought that it could be strengthened by focusing on the most important parts of the character design, that makes them stand out and says something about their per”

“Hi! Your character is so cool and unique! I really love the staff and the effects around it. I think the thing that's off is the foreshortening. It's really one of those things that's like, once yo”

“Hey, your art is super cool! I was impressed at the level of detail you put into your artwork, especially in places like the jacket and the rocks. The advice I would give you is to focus on the ar”

“Hello! Your art is very cute! I think the main thing for me is that her body underneath feels like it's curving a lot to the left in an unnatural way, like she has scoliosis or something. The top h”

“Hello! Let me just say, your artwork is so freaking awesome!! Firstly, I would say crop your artwork to make your characters take up more of the frame. It makes it much easier to appreciate your wo”

“Hello! First of all, I thought the overall compostion you did was well-done, it really has that feeling of closeness and love that I think you were going for. As you said, the blonde character's ha”

“Hello! (This is my first time using this website, haha) The things that stuck out to me first were the foreshortening and harsh shadows, and some lack of finish. 1) Foreshortening means that thi”