@kanna

“You're studying a great artist here, yoneyama mai has been one of my favourite artists for as long as i can remember, but she's also very difficult artist to study because of her insane line control, ...”

“These are great sketches with lots of potential! If you start with exaggerating the hair, clothes and features, it will definitely help make your sketches stand out and i'd highly recommend experi...”

“First of all what a great drawing, very fun and interesting sketch you got here! For your sketch, i'd focus on adding more more depth, since this will help making the scene more believable! I'd ...”

“Push darker values, this will make your values look more believable, and your drawing will overall read much better. Good contrast is very important!”

“Would be awesome to see some kind sunken city ruins or a battleground for the background, or at least something that indicates that the character is in a place where their weapons are important to hav...”

“Another note aside from what i wrote on your drawing, keep in mind proportions of the head and placement of features, and have everything added accordingly, i'd recommend drawing the full face fir...”

“did a rough draw over, might seem a bit messy since i was experimenting a bit with using the drawing app for feedback, but try your best and follow the boxes perspective when drawing the ellipses, if ...”

“You got to follow your construction more, especially when it comes to the rule of thirds, make sure the hairline to brow line, to nose are equal in length as for the jaw you can add a diagonal rath...”

“You can join our Discord and ask for help there and I'll help troubleshoot the problems you're having, if you need help finding the discord link add me, my discord is hideinbed Community Support, ...”

“The most important thing is keeping a consistent light source and rendering style, i saw you got a rough rendering thing going on so did my best to keep that with my paint over i highly recommend l...”

“Now i don't have your reference image, but the most important thing when rendering in general is to keep the rendering consistent, and if you want to define planes and get the drawing to look more bel...”

“This is a lovely painting and i think you're already doing a great job, what i mainly notice myself and i find is pretty important is working with darker values and emphasizing shadows more! this w...”

“Hey so the shoulder will actually appear a lot smaller because the body is twisting away from us, so it'll be more behind, right now the shoulder isn't really connecting into the neck properly, i drew...”

“Tried looking for a reference as similar as the one you chose, when doing portraits it's important to break down everything into simple shapes, then adding details after, this way you can keep vol...”

“I love the artwork Rei, the problem with the arm was just the elbow not being properly extended, hopefully this helps <3”

“You did most of them correctly, but some of them are bent rather than twisted, so i would redo those ones, i highlighted them in red, i also highlighted some that are unclear and should be redrawn as ...”

“I personally think the shapes already read well, especially due to how depry Luffy can look/be! And i love the artwork. The feedback i have is very subtle but it would be considering adding a cast ...”

“Nice work! Here's some direction: Try your best to rotate the bee along with the given plane, if you look at the bee reference on the top left, it's sitting on a plane as well, on the right we're g...”

“I think you're doing great, good work! and you're definitely on the right track! you're lacking a consistent core shadow in your values (darkest shadow) and some areas where that shadow is normally...”