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“I can see that you are aiming for an emotional story in your shot. The intimacy being shown by the Princess touching Links cheek while touching her heart. You can see that it can cause the intended fl”

“Not a bad start. Just a bit more practice with the simple forms and rotation of those forms. What makes a hand look believable is when the fingers overlap one another. I did not see that happening wit”

“Desenhar alguém com as pernas cruzadas pode ser um desafio e tanto para artistas. Não sei se você estava usando uma referência ou tentando desenhar de imaginação. Ao observar uma boa referência, você ”

“I see that you are providing a fairly finished work. It does not hurt to post some rough/blocked in forms or gestures with a roughed in background. Just as long as it is not too messy and your audienc”

“This is a good start. I can see you are using simple forms to build the finger and control your structure. Since hands come in all shapes and sizes it would be helpful to know what the goal is? I see ”

“Das ist ein sehr starker Anfang. Um Ihre Frage zu beantworten: Nachdem ich ein wenig mit Ihrem Stück experimentiert habe, sehe ich kein Problem darin, etwas tiefer in die Dunkelheit zu tappen, und sol”

“Let me share with you, there is not a single artist here that has not struggled with gesture drawing. I have been practicing for years and it does seem like an uphill climb; however, there have been t”

“Looking at your knight, I see you kept the design simple and clean and added a cape to match your composition. I also noticed the hand was a bit off. Just a suggestion, it helps to bend the wrist and ”

“Keep at it. You were almost there. As you can see from the draw-over, you were very close. In its simple form you can see you are just dealing with tapering cylindrical forms that are stacked while th”

“Don't be too hard on yourself when you are in the learning phase. I left a number of notes regarding both of the areas you were looking to have a critique on. I pray this helps you on your art journey”

“You certainly took on quite a challenge trying to wrap brick around this pear form. I like to see that you used some contour lines around the horizontal axis of the form. You don't have to limit yours”