Im not to professional with art but I have a bit of a basic with boxes and some knowledge on clothing/ The hair is really well one and you have good color for the folds. I think the should since itll be going more upward could use more color. The arm would cast more shadows and the clothing woulds stick to much to the body. Not really great with this stuff but hope its somewhat helpful. This is a really beautiful artowrk tho <3 | Artwod Feedback