Hello, Really cool pirate ! 2 point I found: * The right hand (on our left) is bigger than the other even if it is far away. * The nose and mouth are nealy facing us but the face is more turn than that => this give the effect of a broken nose and mouth : Is it purposefully or just a misconstruction ? Also maybe darken the background to focus more on the figure at the front.

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Felix enrique Bokusu capote · 2026-08-07T12:45:05.744Z

This is a work in progress but I feel like I don't really know how to make it work, what to fix, what to add. I think I could use some help

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