Hiya! Sorry for the wait!! I'm not familiar with this anime so apologies in advance if I've unintentionally changed them a little bit. I understand values can become something really messy very quickly, and all of your friends are probably ALL right, depending on how you execute it. The most important thing is that you figures are readable in the values you do end up choosing. So you can either go lighter/darker, but in this instance I went darker as they have very light hair and I figured that would look cool as a shape against the background.

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R Berkowitz · 2026-03-31T00:11:25.303Z

Hello everyone! I am genuinely stumped on applying the values. I have friends tell me that the image is too dark or that it was too light or the background is too dark or too light, and I am a bit frustrated that I an struggling to figure out the value. the scarf is supposed to be black but the haori or coat be white but I think I made certain aspects of it too dark. Local value, render value, compositional value is driving me crazy and I can't seem to figure it out. And I plan to add color in layer after softening some edges and adding transitional values. I feel like would never figure it out so anything helps!!

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