hey im just getting into critiques so bear with me. first of all, you should use a LOT of references, especially if youre starting to learn something as difficult as the head. Also construction is very dependant on perspective, i reaally really reccomend trying challenge 52. now onto more specific stuff: (numbers on the paintover corelate to the sentences.) 1. the head was a little too long, and you drew the eyebrows above the brow line 2. you drew the transition between the front and side plane (chin to jaw) with practically a straight line, make sure you make the angle clearly visible 3. when you draw the eyes you really have to exaggarate the curve so it doesnt look as flat, this applies to practically all eyes you drew, the side ones really just need more form, you should try to draw them larger so you have space to draw the planes. 4.you wouldnt really see this much of the bottom of the nose. other than that the top face looks great, but i changed the proportions on the bottom face and adjusted the eyes so they look in the same direction. also the neck on the top one is too long, i really like the shape for the torso tho, thats really all i can say, goodluck twin :3 | Artwod Feedback