Hey there! I really loved the way you drew the face, what a great technique! :D However, the perspective of the head and the body doesn’t quite match. You drew the head from a more frontal angle, while the body feels like we’re viewing the character from a slightly lower angle. Because of that, the head should follow the same perspective, showing a bit of the underside of the jaw and nose, and the eyebrow line and nose line should arc upward. On the other hand, even though I didn’t draw over it, the jacket should also follow the same 3/4 perspective of the pose, since right now it feels like it’s not following that angle and ends up looking a bit flat. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback