Hi Cal, Firstly, awesome work. This is a really cool idea with an interesting story. I love the moodiness and uncertainty of whats going to happen. I'm still very much on my learning journey in terms of art and drawing the figure so consider this feedback lightly. I tried my best to draw basic mannequins to represent them. Something I notice the legs/tail of the mermaid feels like it doesn't have much gravity or bend down after the hips. That being said do mermaids have femoral bones or not?? Gosh anatomy. Overall well done and keep it up! I look forward to see the end result. | Artwod Feedback