U can improve much on the Seth of the painting , u should separate the foreground middle ground and background, foreground ideally more saturated and dark and it get less saturated and Bridget in md Idle ground and foreground, u should really need to convey for, M and death and detail foreground and then u can detail less middle ground and background , the values are off and need more grouping of values and better composition. Plus work in water Color in dry Metroid like when the colors are dried add more , u can use hair blower to fasten it or just detail other part of drawing ( see Scott Saba videos if u want to learn to use watercolour) Ps my correction is general idea mistakes that I did in 2 min it should look with better values compositions and Color . Plus defying the foreground is really important to convey death . Plus I m not really good in environments but I m trying to help

