Really awesome drawing, so much is happening! I have a few pointers but since it's traditionally drawn i dont expect you to apply them. For future drawings you could perhaps do a primitive shape first and maybe you did. But the front of the car felt a bit off to me. I changed some perspective and also the front wheel It took me a while to understand it was the front, so i moved the license plate to the bumper. When using white as a highlightpay attention how the volume works. The highlight is typically not on the edge but a bit further in. When using brushpen a lot of artists use finelines with it to do the thinner lines, so don't be ashamed to use multiple pens. I thought the underside of the hood could use hatching to define the angle. The lines you did on the floor and back, I didnt think they contributed a lot. If you do them make sure they follow the other hatching, Like they could represent some decals on the floor,wall. Then the last one is: is it smoke from the car? Because it seemed like bubbles to me. For smoke I would not use white highlights but just hatch it. The shadows are fine but it's just not reflective. Looking forward to more drawings!
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