So this is just an opinion, but I think the original has more story behind it. I know the new drawing is a portrait and is more of detail, but it’s also not a bad thing to let drawings be simplified. In my opinion If you could simplify and keep the complexity it would show. But overall I can see you have improved. And that’s encouraging I hope my feedback is seen as trying to help, and I hope you continue to grow as an artist and are inspired to keep going.👍 | Artwod Feedback