The pose looks unnatural, part of this is the hips and right thigh being too large in comparison to the rest of the body. Her legs are also in a strange position that can be fixed by showing a bit of the left foot and knee. The face and eyes looking straight at the camera while the body is facing slightly to the right gives uncanny valley since the position puts strain on the spine. I'm not a digital artist, so my paintover looks terrible. Hope this is helpful. I can see you have a lot of potential, and just need to work a bit more on your anatomy. | Artwod Feedback