Hi there, Really cool illustration. Just a couple of things I would point out, both about perspective. The first is to thing about you convergence lines. The truck in the background looks tilted because of how you drew the back end (the left side was tilted up and not converging towards the horizon). Her face also isn’t converging towards the horizon. The second is to do with forced perspective. If you want the smoking hand to look like it’s coming at you then you need to really push the size difference. I would make the hand bigger otherwise it just looks like she has an abnormally large hand. I would recommend using reference of other artists who’ve done a similar thing. Some other minor points to consider. The fishing rod is blending into the background. I didn’t notice it until I saw the no fishing sign. Lastly her left hand look a little awkward. I’m not sure what she’s doing with her hand. I would have her hand resting on her knee or have the hand angled down more in a resting position. | Artwod Feedback