Hi, you are doing great, figures are hard :) and there are so many things to learn. What i have tried to show you in this feedback, is a greater focus on constructing the figure. When you have learned form / construction it will be alot easier to predict where your shadows will fall. :) Have fun with the next ones. Looking forward to seeing more. :)

First time doing this - Figure - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Naylen Bell · 2026-06-04T22:21:42.865Z

Hello as the title suggests this is my first time using the artwod critique feature. I'm hoping that im not using it wrong in someway. my main problems with the drawing is the shading feeling shallow in some way. the difficulty of drawing smaller hands and faces on a character and the anatomy destroying some of the original force and gesture of the pose (the drawing on the side with the riley rhythms is meant to indicate what i was trying to go for) if i could get critique on this that would really help!

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