it looks a bit messy
Pintar (1)
Urban Sketching
Notas do artista:
Something looks off, should I add more details?
Comenta 3
Correct the perspective
> The drawing has a nice atmosphere and a lot of detail, especially in the trees, plants, and background. However, some of the people could use more attention to anatomy and proportions, particularly the arms, legs, and body shapes. The perspective of the path could also be made more consistent so that it leads the viewer’s eye naturally into the background. Adding more variation in line weight and shading would help create stronger depth, with the foreground darker and more detailed than the background. A few more shadows around the people, trees, and plants would also make the scene feel more three-dimensional.