I think why it doesnt look right is the anatomy/proportion is a little bit off. The torso is around 2 ish heads long. The neck is also a bit shorter and the shoulders a bit longer, adding a curve for the waist I think also gives it more of a human looking shape, it looks really good so keep up the good work! I can also see how you have the boxes, its just connecting them and getting them a good kinda shape helps. <3 | Artwod Feedback