This is really cool! The hatching youve done looks amazing! I think something that might make it more appealing since you dont know is the anatomy is a bit wonky (small ammount of proportions) Since this is a more stylized thing I might not be the most helpful but I can give a bit of info. The main thing I think is the hair is a bit too bulgy, I know they usual have bigger hair but I think it could be a bit smaller. The clothes wrapping around can also help. Anatomy and proportion is pretty spot on! <3 overall pretty peak
Thank u for the feedback this will help a lot I’ve only been doing to for almost 2 years and I’m only young it’s impressive but in all seriousness thanks I will make good use of this info thanks for your time