This is already a very complex pose and youve done very good on it! I think adding depth to the pose might help it look a bit better (im not great at this but you could have the arm going closer to the camera) or if you want it down to his hip rotating the arm might make it look a bit better. Having the legs go forward a bit more also might help as then it looks more like a stance. And for the energy thing adding a glowing middle (from stuff ive looked up) is what the show kinda does with it. It also has a lighter line around the main center to. And for the like kinda energy around it (i would also maybe outline it in a light color) a simple ripple effect with lighter colors might help. this is really good overall keep going <3

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Hamzah Rabbani · 2026-10-01T16:05:47.308Z

Working on a Rasenshuriken drawing and im struggling with all the spinning energy shapes. The anime makes it look super clean but mine is just a mess of lines. Also not sure about Naruto's pose. Any feedback would help, trying to learn the effect step by step and share my art progress

@crashingouthá 2 semanas

This is already a very complex pose and youve done very good on it! I think adding depth to the pose might help it look a bit better (im not great at this but you could have the arm going closer to the camera) or if you want it down to his hip rotating the arm might make it look a bit better. Having the legs go forward a bit more also might help as then it looks more like a stance. And for the energy thing adding a glowing middle (from stuff ive looked up) is what the show kinda does with it. It also has a lighter line around the main center to. And for the like kinda energy around it (i would also maybe outline it in a light color) a simple ripple effect with lighter colors might help. this is really good overall keep going <3

Rasenshuriken Naruto drawing... how do i make the effect readable

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