Amazing drawing! I like the colors… 👀👀👌 I changed the face anatomy slightly and lightened the right side of the face to create a more gradual transition. (Btw, I accidently removed some of the orange outlines for the lighting but it’ll probably be better if you readded them back) I noticed in most Chinese art pieces that they have softer outlines on the hair, and darker lines with the hair close to the face and on the eyes. I adjusted the eyes based off references aswell.

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Anonymous · 2026-09-26T23:58:55.783Z

I recently have been getting into chinese rendering style and I tried it myself but i feel like it's still lacking. I really appreciate some help to try and figure out what i should improve.

@theoOntem

Amazing drawing! I like the colors… 👀👀👌 I changed the face anatomy slightly and lightened the right side of the face to create a more gradual transition. (Btw, I accidently removed some of the orange outlines for the lighting but it’ll probably be better if you readded them back) I noticed in most Chinese art pieces that they have softer outlines on the hair, and darker lines with the hair close to the face and on the eyes. I adjusted the eyes based off references aswell.

@owen88243Ontem

the gradual face light in the paintover helps a lot, maybe bring the orange light outlines back just on the cheek and hair edge so the bounce stays without fighting the softer hair lines

@nils97866há 11 horas

maybe keep the orange edge only where the cheek turns into shadow, then let the hair edge fade sooner so the face light stays the first thing i notice

@artwodguyhá 5 horas

lovely feedback!

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