This is super cool! im not very good at effects but can give kinda a base for anatomy etc. Boxes for the chest and waist are helpful to, breaking it down into simple shapes like cyliders and stuff. Finding a flow line can also help, and I couldnt tell where the other arm is, but trying to balance the pose or giving it a focus point also might help. with effects having kinda a action aura to say around the first might make it look more actiony idk <3 Love the piece tho

Luffy Red Roc draw... struggling with the punch + fire - Anime - Community Driven Art Feedback Platform

Salina Pressimone · 2026-09-26T22:55:53.786Z

Did an easy drawing of Luffy doing Red Roc and the effect is probably hiding how bad my actual pose is lol. The action pose feels stiff and the fire around the fist looks messy. Anime feedback would be really useful here, especially on making the punch feel heavier. trying to learn effects too and share some art progress from these workouts

@crashingoutHá 1 semana

This is super cool! im not very good at effects but can give kinda a base for anatomy etc. Boxes for the chest and waist are helpful to, breaking it down into simple shapes like cyliders and stuff. Finding a flow line can also help, and I couldnt tell where the other arm is, but trying to balance the pose or giving it a focus point also might help. with effects having kinda a action aura to say around the first might make it look more actiony idk <3 Love the piece tho

Luffy Red Roc draw... struggling with the punch + fire

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