I LOVE the design, not great with values myself, so can’t offer advice there, perhaps a desaturated gold flower patter on the armor?
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Hey! Love this design and the style! I did a quick overdrawing and value corrections. For the values, I just increased the brightness at the top while I kept the bottom darker. For the design. I think you have to unify the shape language a bit more, since the rose at the head feels separated fo the design in general. So I was thinking that you can design the armour by following the rose shape language, I mean, draw the armour plates as if they were some petals, or maybe by following the "wrapping" of the petals, as I did in the forearm. I believe that this way the design would feel more unified. Hope this helps! Awesome work
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