first of all i really like the hair, and the clothing as well as the overall design and pose idea. However i think there are some structural problems here. your neck is way too long and the forearm of your swordarm is way to short, the hand i would say is also a little too small. in my opinion it would also look better if you didnt chose that angle of the sword arm. for a better readable sillouette i wouldnt hide the elbow behind the body. additionally i think your shoulders should be further away from the body. you could also show a bit more of the ribcage. For the hip i am not really sure what is going on there, your torso and breast are viewed from the front while your hip is extremely tilted back(my explanation of your very short hip lengh(blue line)) and then your legs are viewed as streight again. i cant really explain it better since i am also not a professional but maybe someone else can call out better what seems wrong to me there. For the face i think the henrik already sad it all. i hope my messy feddback helped you a bit, keep it up!! Greetings Horus | Artwod Feedback