@david73080

“Look up some pictures of clouds and meabe lean a bit to that Mainly the clouds on the bottom left corner I think otherwise your piece is perfect( but am not a proffesional so i cant tell you for...”

“Hmm, improve 3d forms huh? You could just add some cell shading Simple and wont make it more realistic, just more believable”

“Hi man/girl, i LOVE your work SO MUCH MAN/GIRL Do you mind, checking out my work? I would like it from someone with taste”

“I dont think this needs any shading and forms? You can draw shapes and make lines wraping around thr form( and meabe making a blob or animal out of it ).”

“The ground is too vauge, add more detail and meabe a cast shadow, also the sky could be more intresting. I think the focus point is really not going to get lost becaus..yk. But still, this is reaaaaaa...”

“Its a hard to drink as a skeleton if it just Pours out. Its not bad overall but there are some things to keep in mind.: 1; hes/shes pretty hard to see, push down on you pencil a bit more next time. 2;...”

“Looks like you already have good forms, ,you should try to make something more complex like; a lamp, controller, a mug meabe even a microphone”

“Hello, am definitely not on your level but what i can help with is that you could make the person holding thr sword much more light and make the darks darker cuz right the darks and the lights are lik...”