Hello, am definitely not on your level but what i can help with is that you could make the person holding thr sword much more light and make the darks darker cuz right the darks and the lights are like a gradient but you got a lot of sharp angels. What am trying to say is; make it clear that "this is dark, this is shadow and this is light" it will make your piece a lot more clear and make it pop out | Artwod Feedback