@mark59869

“Please don't hesitate to post for feedback. I am just starting the path also. We can learn by reviewing each other. I really like the drawing. I do get a sense of 3D. My recommendation would be t...”

“Overall this looks good. A couple suggestions. 1. You did the recess for the windows correctly. I think you have the door backwards. (red). 2. The trash can looks huge compared to the house. If ...”

“A few things I found. The bottom 3 steps are converging a little high. The vertical lines are getting closer together as they approach the edge of the cylinder. This is good. The steps at the to...”

“The photo of the drawing was at an angle so hope that does not skew things too much. I traced the lines back to the VP. The ones to the left VP (blue) look decent to me. If this is 2P then the gree...”

“The rendering on the face looks awesome. I am wondering if the hair could use more contrast. shouldn't there be some clear highlights and shadow areas?”

“I really like the form on the 3/4 views. Full disclosure, I have not gotten to that section yet. I am in the forms and contour lines section though. My main feedback would be for the vertical conto...”

“Some things to consider. Based on the position of the highlight, it looks like the light source is directly above and slightly towards the viewer. That means the cast shadow should be directly under...”