@yurei471

“Hey! Cool gesture and idea. You seem to understand form and light sources/shading but indeed lack guidance. For process (see A): I would suggest trying to map out values first in greyscale - th”

“Hi! You got pretty good edge control and decent values. I would try to add more color variety and highlights. There is a nice article about coloring in this week's Artwod blog - it might have some ”

“Hi. Really nice shading on the torso. I don't know what reference looked like but I feel like his ribcage got flattened too much. Serratus might be positioned a bit too high. His belly (particu”

“Hi! Love he colors and perspective. I think the issues with this one is that the branches(?) are shaded with a different light source in mind than the main figure. There seems to be some sort o”

“Hi. I would highly suggest visiting Artwod's intro in drawing course since it delves deeper into the topic and explain it better than I could, but in short, if you struggle with perspective: - d”

“Hi! Cute creature! You got shapes and shadows mostly right. What you could improve is not just changing lightness but also hue and saturation of the color when picking one for shadows and highlight”

“Edit: fixed typos. Hi. I think the composition is fine - you can sort of guess the idea behind the drawing, the focus is also set right. You are right - the values need work. General rule of ”

“Hi! Pretty colors and a cute drawing. Your friend is very lucky. For coloring you do not have to stick to strictly just 2 colors, even as complementary. You can move the hue slider a bit more fo”

“Hi. Perhaps adding suggestion of a ear (from behind) and a line indicating spine could help to emphasize the pose.”

“Hi! Nice job on hair shading. I think the issue is that we have big part of the top of his head which would suggest that we look from above while his chin and nose are drawn as if we would look ”

“Hey! I think you got a decent structure, the nose and lips are looking pretty good. Tweaks: when you draw a sphere with a contour line and it turns away from the viewer that line moves closer to”

“The designs are pretty cool. What they are lacking are highlights and more depth in values (perhaps monitor calibration issue?). When I did a paintover I also noticed you seem to be undecided on where”

“As requested, feedback on anatomy. I think the gesture and hatching are pretty good. - body height is between 6-8 heads for adults, split in the mid around section where legs start (omg the cens”

“The pose is indeed very nice indeed, I like the story telling aspect of the image. For rendering try to use not just soft edges (airbrush) but also hard edges (e.g. hard round brush) or it will all”

“The lighting looks flat because you can't decide on where the light comes from. Parts of her are shaded as if there was diffused ambient light around (chest), but also weak light from above (horns, fa”

“Since it is an image imitating a fight in a ring I would go for light from above, just like on a stage or in an actual fight ring. I also think working with more red would emphasize that bloody/gri”

“The combination of orange, marine and green is really pretty. The drawing is really cool design wise. The colors look dull because you are using white for highlights and simply darker orange for sh”

“The torso looks flat because you handle muscles as if they were drawings on the body. Muscles have volume, though. In simplified terms, you can imagine it as sort of bags of sand/jelly (red) attached ”

“I think the light of background doesn't correspond to the shading of the figure. The ground is covered in dark shadow and the sky is dark red-orange and yet the figure seems to be lighted if it would ”

“The shading comes out dull because you stay within the same hue when coloring the drawing. Change hue when choosing color of the shadows and highlights. You can pick it based on light warmth and surro”

“Hi. As requested a bit of feedback from me. As another person said you already got decent face construction. You did cut part of her face too much (see our right side) and her jaw (it should be furt”

“The face is mostly fine, the stiffness comes from the neck, imo. The eye is located in a socket - the eyebrow should wrap around it. I also changed ear position (it should align with eyes and no”

“I think you got pretty nice colors and style going. The question is: is paintery look what you really want? You got cell shading style going on. Paintery look would require soft shading normally (can ”

“I would highly suggest looking up photos of sunsets. Normally during that time the upper sky is dark violet/blue and becomes more red/yellow at horizon. The house has similar value as the figure of”