Hi! Pretty colors and beautiful lineart for hair. Really love those eyelashes! For the head: - It is a bit too elongated on the left side (ours). Remember, head is kind of like a sphere, features need to wrap around it. - Hairline was placed way too back on her head, it should follow the curve of the skull (see green line) - the side part should also follow the curvature of the head (see pink line) - I assume the big chunk of hair in the middle is supposed be part of the bangs (usually the case for anime characters) - it should be closer to the hairline in front of the head - I understand what you were trying to do with the ear but it looks awkward like that and should be parting hair. I think moving it down and adding a playful cowlick would work for composition as well. - the head might also feel awkward due to neck placement. Neck should be roughly at the middle of the jaw (see B) and is also tilted slightly. Hope it helps!