#15
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“Hello, distant mountains should be lighter, and kinda in cyan blue range 3-point looks good, relative scale looks good as well Cast shadow says light source seems to be on the left..maybe emphasize ...”

“Suggestions: Study rock gesture, determine light source, add in secondary shapes with value contrast inside the big rock shapes while describing the forms, add in the cast shadow and ambient occlusion...”

“In general, colors are right. In nature, the simple formular is warm light/cool shadows or cool light/warm shadows; Blue in the shadows mostly come from ambient light from the sky. Also in nature, mos...”

“Hello, maybe consider taking some Brushwork course for improvement”

“Hello, the shadow seems not to be hard enough to form effective contrast with the light since the light source is a strong direct one…normally 2 value-light and shadow, or 3-4 values, light/shadow/Hal...”

“I think the background complements well to the focal subject matter..It gives what this is about..”