Tu veux enregistrer ton avis ?
Enregistrez tous vos commentaires au même endroit sur votre compte. Vos commentaires seront privés et non publics.

Améliore tes ombres et ta maîtrise de la lumière, 3 min de lecture
Master comic storytelling by blocking shapes, simplifying forms into mannequins, imitating professional styles, then creating your own narrative-driven panels.
Rendering


Matilda Character Design
Something feels off; I'm quite spotty with the hands. But I'm also a bit iffy with the feet. The shadow creature behind her has a rather stiff pose in comparison to the front character as well. Your feedback will be appreciated! :)

Character rendering and lighting
Hi, I am struggling to figure out how to shade my character and his clothes especially with the color black that I used for the jacket. I haven't really decided on a light source, but ideally it's coming from the left side of him. Considering the materials as well I wanted it to be a cloth like material for the jacket and regular jeans. I would appreciate any help and input on this thanks.

plague
i need help figuring out whats the next step, i want to render the clothes to look more refined and painted but i simply dont know how to go about it so im hoping for some advice

Storyboard
I've tried to convey a pretty complex story with this storyboard. I was wondering if the story is readable enough to understand the plot where a boy who has left home has found a new way to cope with the absence of his family.

First statue drawing
The ref

First statue drawing
First time drawing from a statue reference. Got scared of values

Elephantgust
...

Character design
Need some advice on the anatomy, is the perspective of the leg and overall proportion

Don Quixote
Here is with the feedback i was given. I tried making the feather more interesting and resting the spear against him. I also tried the armor a more 3D look. I kept the attitude because this iteration is supposed to be smug . I tried fixing the prespective problems too, I hope it reads better and i will keep at it. Thanks everyone,