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Améliore tes valeurs et tes mélanges, 3 min de lecture
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering


Matilda Character Design
Something feels off; I'm quite spotty with the hands. But I'm also a bit iffy with the feet. The shadow creature behind her has a rather stiff pose in comparison to the front character as well. Your feedback will be appreciated! :)

plague
i need help figuring out whats the next step, i want to render the clothes to look more refined and painted but i simply dont know how to go about it so im hoping for some advice

Storyboard
I've tried to convey a pretty complex story with this storyboard. I was wondering if the story is readable enough to understand the plot where a boy who has left home has found a new way to cope with the absence of his family.

Plein Air Oil Painting
It feels more impressionist than I was intentionally going for. How do I get more real feeling textures in the water and the sand and the trees etc?

First statue drawing
The ref

First statue drawing
First time drawing from a statue reference. Got scared of values

Elephantgust
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Character design
Need some advice on the anatomy, is the perspective of the leg and overall proportion

Don Quixote
Here is with the feedback i was given. I tried making the feather more interesting and resting the spear against him. I also tried the armor a more 3D look. I kept the attitude because this iteration is supposed to be smug . I tried fixing the prespective problems too, I hope it reads better and i will keep at it. Thanks everyone,