Mullet guy?

I cannot seem to get the face (specifically eyes and nose) right in full bodies, perhaps, maybe I should pass to digital where u can zoom? Furthermore I don't think i get right how the clothes flow at all, and I would like to get some opinions on if this "style" is better with remarked lips or not. Beforehand, thank you.

Children of Fire

I feel like the shading, specially on the mother's face, looks strange. I realize I struggle with the facial planes and it might be related to this. Light is meant to come from top-down, but I'm not sure I achieved it all that well. Neck area also looks off. I think overall I have a hard time shading, perhaps due to bad old habits.

Mullet!

I cannot seen to draw eyes in such a little face, maybe i should pass to digital perhaps? And also I dont think I get right how clothes flow. And I would love to get an opinion on if this "style" looks better with remarked lips, or without remarked lips

The discouraged knight

Step 4 - fixing form again

Gentle protector character concept

Hello, I’m looking for any feedback you might be kind enough to share with me. I’m working in a cell-shading style so no soft transitions (except for a few air brush strokes), kinda like hades. Especially the face, I’m not sure I got right. Thank you!

Facial expressions pt 2

With fineliners and watercolor. I had more patience than the previous one.

Day 15

another day down

Oh god its too hard

I tried to draw with a pen only so i wanted to indicate the form of his clothes with the least amount of folds an details But I think i messed up (not too much but still 😁) And for shadows, i picked a direction of light which doesn't create big and too much shadows (ignore the vector). can anyone give me a feedback?🙂 Sorry for terrible English

A Friendly Meeting

I'm not sure if anything is off with my anatomy currently when I'm looking at it.