There is so much charm in this piece! Awesome job! Depending on your priorities moving forward - especially if callouts are a goal, one option might be to strengthen them as an element of composition on the page. The purpose of the page in a pipeline will be to communicate information to someone like a 3D modeler, so providing a strong "Front/Back/Side" view is useful, as well as highlights to functional elements (your buckles could be an example) if it were to be handed off to an animator who need to know how pieces might fit together or come apart. In regard to checking range of value, a useful tool maybe to check your image in grayscale. Contrast will guide the eye of your audience, so it is good to focus that on elements in your piece that you want to be your focal point. If it is used all over the page, it makes it harder to know where to spend focus.
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