@garsna

Peindre

Howdy! The most glaring thing I am noticing with your image is that a lot of the lines are the same thickness. I am struggling a little to figure out what is form vs what is supposed to be shadow. You can apply the rule of big/medium/small with your lines to make it a little easier for the viewer to figure out what it is they are looking at. It can also help with the heaviness of your line work and make it feel less busy. I'd also suggest making sure that when you draw a line it is purposeful. Right now it feels like there are a bunch of black lines for the sake of being there instead of depicting form or volume. If you are still worried about it being too line heavy you can also try inking with colors besides black. It can make the lines feel a little less jarring and makes the line work overall feel less heavy. I hope this helps! Happy drawing!

@saritos

Peindre

Hi Hi! The composition looks nice! I love the double linework on dogs! Suits them well! We must avoid unnecessary information in order to obtain a clearer approach. While colors and rendering are performing hard lifting with shapes, the two comic artists you named maintain a solid outline and keep everything in simple shapes. In this manner, volume will likewise be achieved. You are doing well when it comes to understanding figures; the next step is to understand volume. Understanding how basic geometric objects like squares, spheres, and cylinders were built in perspective is the basis of volume. Your figure will appear more realistic as a result. You were going on the correct path, but as you were building things, you neglected to consider volume. What also can help if you study their art few times and then try to apply on your ideas. Hope it helps! Have fun experimenting!