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Améliore tes proportions de personnages et tes talents en anatomie, 3 min de lecture
Break down stylized characters into basic shapes, experiment with silhouettes, and layer anatomy to create expressive, believable designs with personality.
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Storyboard
I've tried to convey a pretty complex story with this storyboard. I was wondering if the story is readable enough to understand the plot where a boy who has left home has found a new way to cope with the absence of his family.

Plein Air Oil Painting
It feels more impressionist than I was intentionally going for. How do I get more real feeling textures in the water and the sand and the trees etc?

First statue drawing
The ref

First statue drawing
First time drawing from a statue reference. Got scared of values

Elephantgust
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Character design
Need some advice on the anatomy, is the perspective of the leg and overall proportion

Don Quixote
Here is with the feedback i was given. I tried making the feather more interesting and resting the spear against him. I also tried the armor a more 3D look. I kept the attitude because this iteration is supposed to be smug . I tried fixing the prespective problems too, I hope it reads better and i will keep at it. Thanks everyone,

Mountains
Hi again! So that’d be v2 on this take. Your feedbacks helped a lot! Still not entirely satisfied though, I feel I could not reach the ambiance I wanted to express. Maybe I could not manage the contrats much, I don’t know

Step by step
Well... I’ve given it my best, and that’s all I can do. I’ve learned a lot from the process, but I still have a lot to improve. Thank you for the challenge! Please help me improve by sharing your feedback and comments. Thank you so much!