Hi! First of all, I really like your rendering. Secondly, I want to point out anatomical inaccuracies in your drawing ( which I have noted in the following revision ): -> spacing between objects Assuming you are drawing a head in a different perspective, you would need to imagine how the parts of the face turns. The obvious part are the eyes and the nose. The left eye seems too near to the head, the nose looks a bit misplaced. -> pupils alignment While the intention might be good, the pupils stay with the eyes! ( Although a more accurate version would be that the pupils should move a bit back than the revision I showed in order to not feel flat. ) I made a few adjustments like the added mouth, hand placement etc. Hope this helps ^^