It's really good! The hair is great, and I think the proportions are mostly good. I think you can see a little too much of the right eye if it is completely side view. The eye looks almost like it is a 3/4 view for the eye.
Drawn from reference. This is my second attempt at a side profile after getting some amazing feedback on my previous one. I'd like to know if the proportions here are good and make sense. I also tried rendering with hatching and block shading. Any comments on how that is would be welcome. I know the haching on her back is a bit off, but I think her face and hair are much better. As always, many thanks for any feedback :)
It's really good! The hair is great, and I think the proportions are mostly good. I think you can see a little too much of the right eye if it is completely side view. The eye looks almost like it is a 3/4 view for the eye.
Hey there! I took the correction that Giraslash made already to the proportions :D I'm not the best at hatching things (a technique I didn't practice too often), but you have to follow the direction of the form so you can trace the lines according to it, instead of just drawing straight lines (you didn't to this tho). I said some other things on the video. But generally speaking, just follow the form of the body, and I'd recommend you to look at artists you like and mimic the way they do it :D Hope this helps!
Hey there! I think you did an awesome job already, well done! I kinda pushed around some stuff based on anatomy and a bit more realistic proportions, but ofc I don't exactly know how the ref exactly looks like. Keep up the great work!