This is really well done! It took me a bit to figure out what might help. I've also never drawn a camel before so sorry about that. Your perspective is pretty good and things line up well. I do think your wheels were one of the only things clearly out of perspective and I drew a guide around them to show how they should look. The other thing out of perspective was his far back leg which just needed to be shortened. It looks like you might not be fully understanding the form of things or perhaps you're not starting with enough construction. This is most obvious in the head and neck of the camel. It's very flat and it's because the eye is just flat on the page instead of following the contours of the head. The top of his head also looks like it's in a different perspective to his mouth. Drawing guide lines around the head might or starting with constructing the head in basic shapes would help solve this issue and similar issues throughout the piece. It's still a really good drawing!
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